Plan For Revision

Well my revision for this paper shouldnt be much of a hard one. I obviously need to get some more sources put into the paper since i didnt really have any besides IMDB.com. The way i introduced the paper needs some adjustment since i have to make it seem im writing it for my target publication. I also need to think of a good title which luckily I have been given a good idea for one. I can also do some outside research on my arguement of the drug subculture in my paper. Last i should pretty much shorten up my review of the film at the end of my paper and create my works cited page. I think this paper should turn out just fine after i make these adjustments.